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Jun 23rd, 2008 at 8:10pm

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Slumped in the blood-soaked grass I sat
With her head upon my knee.
That velvet Muzzle had breathed it's last,
Those gentle eyes had turned to glass,
And I fondled the ears that would never cast
Again for beast or me.

The track in the scrub clear marked the path
Of the bull that had gored her flanks.
He'd ripped her guts in a lonely creek,
She'd stood her ground with a mortal shriek
Then carried me clear on her dying feet,
My tears her only thanks.

How I cried for that mare with the gamest eye
And a heart that had passed the test.
No finer horse was ever astride
The ragged heights of the Great Divide;
No finer friend had ever died
'Neath the brow of the mountain's crest.

Oh the blade of anguish twisted deep
At the stroke of that last caress,
Then a serpent stirred within my soul
As anger rose to take control,
And vengeance was my only goal;
My sights on cruel redress.

And the rogue that tore my beauty's flesh
Was mine for black revenge.
I tracked him through the fading light,
beyond the lonely,moonlit night,
Then cornered for that final fight
To death,to death avenge.

A mindless killing-lust took hold
And I screamed with every breath.
He must have known he couldn't win
For his mortal bawling raised a din.
And he fell to me as she fell to him,
But his a slower death.

And when at last the madness ceased
To shake me like a leaf,
Beyond a brooding,distant hill,
My little mare was lifeless still,
And I stared with numbness at the kill
That hadn't eased my grief.

And I mourned that mare with the gamest eye
And a heart that had passed the test.
For no finer horse was ever astride
The ragged heights of the Great Divide;
And no finer friend had ever died
'Neath the brow of the mountain's crest.

By Mark Kleinschmidt


All the best
Skip Smiley

 

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Reply #1 - Jun 24th, 2008 at 8:11pm

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That's quite deep Skip
I can see you as a Banjo Patterson man.
He is a great poet and a horseman.


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Reply #2 - Jun 24th, 2008 at 8:42pm

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That is SO Aussie in its content - Brought a tear to my eyes...

Grrr!!! Cry Cry Cry Cry
 

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Reply #3 - Jul 21st, 2008 at 2:02pm

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I first met Mark many years ago when travelling through to Darwin and enjoyed one of his shows at the Gunadoo Caravan Park.  Catch up from time to time and he does write a good tale.

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